A child on a farm sees a plane fly overhead and dreams of a faraway place. A traveler on the plane sees the farmhouse below and dreams of home. ~Robert Brault
Museum Artifacts:
Some dreams are like a glassed in museum artifacts,
we can see it and ponder it's beauty, but we can never hold it in our hands.
A Nearby Explosion:
Memories are like a nearby explosion,
the moment it happens is brief, but the ringing in our ears can last a lifetime.
An Old Shirt:
Bitterness is like an old shirt,
the more you wear it the more comfortable it gets, and the stains become permanent.
A Passing Train:
Harsh words are like a passing train,
they pass us by harmlessly many times but when they hit us they are devastating.
A Burning Forest;
The gangs of the ghetto are like a burning forest,
they stand together in danger unable to run and that is where they shall fall.
A Repaired Leaky Roof:
Courage is like a repaired leaky roof,
you never know if it will hold strong until it rains.
That Fine Crystal Vase:
Sometimes love is like that fine crystal vase you always longed for,
when you finally have it you place it on a high shelf to protect it from breaking and its true beauty is never revealed.
A Handgun:
Power is like a handgun,
When it is used wisely it serves its purpose of protection, but when it is used carelessly it is a danger to us all.
Condensation:
Prejudice is like condensation on a window pane,
the difference in temperature makes it impossible for one side to see through to the other.
Wild Flowers:
Chances are like wild flowers,
they come and go with the seasons yet only we can decide to stop and pick them up.
Deep Splinters:
Mistakes are like deep splinters,
they enter our lives easily, but they are very hard to work out.
A Pin Drop:
Hope is like a pin drop,
it can fall in a room and never be noticed, yet it is still there just the same.
Stained Glass Windows:
Feelings are like stained glass windows,
everyone that looks through them views things a little differently, but when it is shattered we all see it is a crying shame.
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ReplyDeleteoh wow...love the structure of this..it is different which is immediately appealling...i like the handgun/power one...and the stain glass window brings a nice close to this...
ReplyDeleteI love these metaphors (similes?) So rich in meaning and nicely penned. Wisdom distilled like a fine wine!
ReplyDeleteOh WOW!!! The best thing I have read in ever so long! Carrie,you have you own book of quotes and poetry bound to join a world of classics, right?
ReplyDeleteThank-you again for sharing your wisdom and talent.
wonderful, carrie - so much thought and time writing and definitely for me, pondering these things. and the photo is too cool!
ReplyDeleteThese are so good and a stunning image.
ReplyDeleteWow Carrie, I loved it~ Wonderful photo; I love the last stanza~ I have to read it again ;D
ReplyDeleteoh wow carrie..much wisdom in these.. think the condensation one is my favorite..what a great image..and one to keep in mind...
ReplyDeleteCarrie, this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Carrie :)
ReplyDeleteMy first visit here, you have a lovely blog :)
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May I just say I LOVE every single word connected to the other and that so fitting pic?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful- as always, Carrie.
xoxox
I never metaphor I didn't like - especially these! Just love the picture and the quote too! And let's go shopping! :o)
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice :)
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