Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse #177
Come join us!
There is no first or last in Forever. It is Centre there all the time. ~Emily Dickinson
Life has a strong yet tender pull
that can straighten and bend our path
It leads us ever onward with wise and callused hands
yet like children we pound the pavement
Running hard to follow close
With a crumpled map in hand full of Un legible notes
So we lose our way and we pay the cost
We weep from the hurt we speak of the loss
Why is the journey so hard we ask
As we scrape our knees on a gravel path
It is like the gentlest of birds life says to our face
That circles tangled branches to find its place
To rest on a limb for a moment of shade or shine
There is no rush life says, please take your time!
Love the Dickenson quote. This sums up so much truth: "Life has a strong yet tender pull / that can straighten and bend our path " How much of our lives are actually under our control, how much the tides and pull of the world around us and fate?
ReplyDeleteOh, your advice at the ending....I wish I could have taken heed of it much earlier in life. Now I am bent white fighting against the graying.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful "savour the moment" bit of advice! Well written.
ReplyDeleteGood advice, and I like the gentleness that comes before it.
ReplyDeleteThe last half of this fine poem speaks especially to me today. Wonderful, Carrie!
ReplyDeleteThere is no rush life says,
ReplyDeleteplease take your time!
Love the close Carrie! Pity many may not realise it The rat race is what matters to them.
Hank
Great quote from Emily to open with, and the poem tells us all we need to know about forever, and which branch we sit on in its forest. Enjoyed it, Carrie, and thanks so much for hosting.
ReplyDeleteOf course I love the birds and the visual of them circling to find their place.
ReplyDeleteLove this! That determination that a path must be straightforward constantly tripping one up...a reminder to pay attention.
ReplyDeleteIf only we would listen - a lovely poem Carrie.
ReplyDeletePity !!! O us of little faith.
ReplyDeleteGood Sunday
Much💖love
Carrie, it took some time ... finally realizing so much of life is way beyond our control ... to relax into living ... keep a reserve of strength to get us thru the tough times. Beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteA gentle reminder that is is okay to slow down and enjoy the moments. I enjoyed the touch of the map, even with the map the journey is sometimes still difficult to navigate.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem and it’s advice. Mostly I like how you lead us to it with gentle words. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteLove,love,love this Carrie.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, Carrie. Sage advice that hits many of us too late.
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