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"Sticks and stones are hard on bones
Aimed with angry art,
Words can sting like anything
But silence breaks the heart."
~Phyllis McGinle
Why was your love always a cadence in E minor with a sad melody quick to come to a close?
Did you not see me here with my strong voice always holding every note?
The piano that I loved is abandoned now lost and quiet like feathers when they fall.
These days the only tone that rings out is your cell phone, but it won't be me who calls.
My love would have played you an orchestra with trombones and drums as I dance and I sing.
But all you wanted was a player piano and loud sex that technically had no strings.
Magnificently written! I love the metaphors.
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If delivered, Carrie, "He" got the message. loud and clear and beautifully penned. BTW, I was in these shoes once. She played me along for a year while she waited for her real boy friend who was in the service overseas. When he returned it was the total end for me.
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Obviously not your equal and does not deserve you.It's lonely at the top. Elitist, politically incorrect?...tant pis..it's the truth !
ReplyDeleteThe last line made me smile...but I loved the fallen feathers analogy.
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ReplyDeleteThe no strings kind of guy is such a hollow excuse for music.
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I love Bjorn's comment. Also the piano - quiet like feathers when they fall. And "I would have played you an orchestra." He missed out. Beautiful, Carrie.
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