Artword by Joseph Lorusso
"Ancient lovers believed a kiss would literally unite their souls, because the spirit was said to be carried in one's breath." ~Eve Glicksman
It is not a meager tug this pull that love has upon a woman's soul....
drawing her lips to another's like a golden ember and charring coals....
it holds an utter splendor that is tender yet strong like cobalt steel....
capturing the strength of resistance not to reach out and want to feel....
it's ache lingers in growth that multiplies like big numbers within the heart...
for the magnetic field of a deep kiss is a force no mortal might can pull apart.
Beautiful verses. I enjoyed the last line especially. You have a very nice blog here as well!
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting Write Girl....i will make a trip over to yours....:-)
DeleteCarrie, I can feel the emotion and energy you put into your poem ... so nice.
ReplyDeleteThat is a warm and wonderful comment Helen.....thanks! :-)
Deletethe magnetic field of a deep kiss... I like that... hope you have a great Valentine's Day, Carrie!
ReplyDeletevery nice...thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteExcellent post. By the way, I don't feel low, I don't feel hollow. I found myself in your Blogs I Follow. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you Berowne...:-)
DeleteLovely words Carrie. This reads like some ancient words of wisdom handed down by the ages.
ReplyDeleteAn incantation of love.
ReplyDeleteNice!
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beautiful poem- epecially like the last line!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathe! :-)
DeleteCouldn't help an extra smile at the words which begin your quote - "Ancient lovers" - at nearly 72, would I count amongst their number? Hehehe!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness kisses don't age! ♥
Hey Jinksey you are a spring chicken...you have the passion of youth within your breast...so at 72 you are like 27! :-)
DeleteTender and powerful...lovely write...Happy Valentine's Day, Carrie!
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's Day Tess! :-)
DeleteBeautiful - as is a kiss.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Perhaps it is reflcted in the universe when stars collide to form a supernova?
ReplyDeleteA lovely thought within itself Kutamun! :-)
DeleteMagnetic--so true!
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