You could weave a bamboo hut and place it on sand before the sea.
Or nail a wood frame in a thicket amongst the trees.
You could plant a home, like corn, in a prairie's breeze.
Or lay a brick by brick fortress on a mount for all to see.
But, if there is no love that there in resides,
the rooms may be full, but loneliness will abide.
For a house of cards is like an old fool and his gin,
a sad game of solitaire where no one wins.
Wonderfully written magpie! =)
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Really enjoy the settings you create for the ideal home which need an important ingredient.
ReplyDeleteYour words are so true. Nicely written Carrie
ReplyDeleteHow sad... not to have anyone to play with...
ReplyDeleteYes a house - even full of people can be a lonely place to live without love...nice..bkm
ReplyDeleteBetter a ragged house filled with love than all the riches in the world.
ReplyDeleteYou've captured wisdom and truth with beautiful words.
sings: all you need is love ;-)
ReplyDeleteSo very true, Carrie. A house without love is an empty place.
ReplyDeletebeautiful words from a beautiful lady!
ReplyDeleteexcellent magpie and so true....very nice write....
ReplyDeleteYour words ring so true. Without love a house can never be a home, only a shell for basic protection. Simply beautiful!
ReplyDeletesadly romantic a house of cards..... wonderful
ReplyDeleteExcellent Magpie :)
ReplyDeletewonderfully written
ReplyDeleteperfect so true!!
ReplyDeleteIt bring tears to one's eyes...your writing is deeply profound and so beautiful. Love is everything.
ReplyDeleteGreat Magpie Carrie. You always amaze me with your wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteCan you email me? I wnated to see if you were interested in doing the Poets United interview but I have no means of gettting a hold of you.
you captured the difference of a house and a home beautifully
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and touching. A wonderful magpie, a house cannot be a home without love, and just lovely the way you put it together.
ReplyDeletePoignant piece. I love the way this flows...
ReplyDeleteCan't remember how I stumbled onto your blog, but glad I did, and stayed a while. Wonderful images that accompany poignant posts.
ReplyDeleteoh... so very poignant. i love this. i need to participate in magpie one of these days... your writing is so strong, friend. the end made my throat snag. xo
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, and reminiscent of the Corinthian love chapter, with a little solitaire for texture!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for all your wonderful comments...you have made my Monday morning!
ReplyDelete:-)
So true and beautifully written!
ReplyDeletelike the form to this piece. well written and well put, i couldn't agree more.
ReplyDeleteWords of wisdom!!!
ReplyDeleteSo true!
ReplyDeleteThank you Patience,Manda, and River-Rose for taking the time to read it....:-)i am looking forward to reading everyones....i have not had access to a computer and been super busy at work so it is taking me a while to get caught up. :-)
ReplyDeleteA lovely interpretation of the little pink house!
ReplyDeleteBlessings, Star
this was such a well written and truthful piece...I loved the last verse.
ReplyDeleteAmen. This would make a great song. In fact, it is a song already. I couldn't agree with your sentiments more!
ReplyDeleteWow, that was brilliant. Should be published! Great mapie. Can't wait to read more of your work.
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