I tell you what I see — the landscape of the spirit requires a lung, but no tongue.
~Emily Dickinson
Sisters I speak to you of loss
the cuts that tear down and leave us broken
they hit just as sure as a lumberjack
and we are never quite the same
but despair and love are a two-winged bird
even in the struggle to move on
there is a promise that lingers
and it has the power to lift us
remember that in your winter journeys
for birds soar the sky together
and there is comfort and warmth in the congregation
~~~
Daughters I speak to you of hope
even in the heavy burden of doubt
it has the power to change the landscape
if we give it light like an open curtain in morning
for life is both a forest and a mountain of cut logs
the path is hard and lovely
but even in the struggle to endure
there is a warming fire in our truest home
~~~
Mothers I speak to you of life
beyond the cries and breath of being
and before the prayers that yearned for something more
there are seeds planted long before the blossom’s greenery
soul’s song carried long before the throat a voice
for every mother carries and birth’s eternity.
For Susie 💖
Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse #197. The image here is different than the one at the prompt for my poem became a tribute to brilliant lighted souls and love but the words hold resemblance to the Muse image.
"Despair and love are a two-winged bird" - so beautiful, Carrie. The stanza about hope is WONDERFUL. I love it! A poem of hard truths, so well expressed. Made me think of Susie, and Dawn.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sherry, and yes you are right, Dawn is very much an inspiration in this poem.
DeleteDespair, love and hope wrapped in a beautiful poem, Carrie, Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bev! I am glad you joined in at the Muse.
DeleteI expected this was for Susie. What a lovely gesture, Carrie.
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend. 💙 She has been on my mind and heart.
DeleteDear Carrie ~~~ this simply gorgeous! Love how you used the Sister/Daughter/Mother triad .. brilliant.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you Helen. You are so sweet.
DeleteEchoing the comments above, this is an open-throated song, gorgeous and warm.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much my friend. 🌹
DeleteA wonderful sermon for Susie and the rest of us. I had Dawn and Susie in my mind at every line of mind also. But too for the others who had to let go.
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To all that know Susie and of Dawn you cannot help but hold them close in your thoughts and prayers. Thank you Jim for your kind words.
DeleteCarrie, your poem is so beautiful. Thank you for being there when I feel so lost. Grief is a painting that changes with every brushstroke of light and dark I have in me.
ReplyDeleteYour description of grief is absolutely beautiful. Anytime you need to talk you can call day or night. Thank you for your sweet and beautiful comment. You truly inspire me my friend.💜🦋
DeleteA beautiful soothing read, Carrie. I love these lines, what you said about hope:
ReplyDelete"...has the power to change the landscape
if we give it light like an open curtain in morning"
"the path is hard and lovely."
<3
Thank you so much Sunra and thank you for joining us at the Muse!
DeleteCarrie - This is absolutely beautiful it speaks to the heart. Your poem is a reflection of your wondrous spirit.
ReplyDeleteAwwww thank you dear Truedessa! I truly believe your spirit is a wondrous one my friend!
DeleteA beautiful poem for a beautiful spirit gone too soon.
ReplyDeleteIndeed her spirit is beautiful and Heaven is a brighter place for having her. 💖
DeleteA poem of great warmth and hope itself, Carrie--I especially like the way you painstakingly build what you want us to see line by line--and love images like "...life is both a forest and a mountain of cut logs." A congregation here we all should hope to join, I think.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Joy. You always dig deep and read a poem with a poet's heart. Your comments always mean so much to me.
DeleteInteresting tones of despair and hope
ReplyDelete"and before the prayers that yearned for something more"
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much love...
Thank you dear Gillena.
DeleteBeautiful and deep tribute. "but despair and love are a two-winged bird" yes, so important.
ReplyDeleteThank you Qbit. So glad you joined in this week. I know you are a busy guy but we do miss you when you are not here at the Muse.
DeleteThis has touched me deeply.
ReplyDeleteGoing to have my daughters read this too.
Thank you!
Awwww thank you so much Syl!
DeleteCarrie, I love the abiding hope that weaves throughout your inspirational poem. We need the light more than ever <3
ReplyDelete"despair and love are a two-winged bird"
ReplyDeleteThis poem is formatted perfectly in regards to the use of three people. Outstanding, Carrie!
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