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Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse # 50 Yes this is our 50th prompt Yay!
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Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse # 50 Yes this is our 50th prompt Yay!
Come join us!
The rustling sounds at the back drew her to the fence like a
lure. Sara had finally arrived at the
MacGregor Ranch, hoping to find Mrs. Covington, the owner of the property. She had been longing to make this trip for
such a long time and get answers about her real father, Leon. He had been a horse trainer and lived on the
property for years as a ranch hand. This
was the only thing she knew about him.
He was a stranger otherwise. A
person she had never known, a face that she had never seen except in pictures.
Peering through the
open slat in the fence she tried to get a glimpse of him before she walked
around to the front and knocked on the ranch house door. So many questions
filled her mind, as her stomach stirred like a cauldron of butterflies. What if he did not want to see her? What if she had to leave with no answers at
all? Before she could think up another
ending of doom, a hand patted her on the shoulder, sending her reeling backward
with a scream as loud as a siren.
Once she had
regained her breath and heartbeat, she looked around to see Mrs. Covington, a tall lanky woman with a voice
rough like old rusty nails. “How can I
help you, young lady?” Sara took a long
swallow like it was whiskey going down hard, “Well yes, I called you a few
weeks ago, uh about your horse trainer?”
she said in a question as if she was no longer sure what she had
done. “Sara Mosley? Oh yes, I remember you.” Mrs. Covington
wrapped her arm around her and led her to the house. “We have much to talk
about Miss Sara, more than a phone call could rightly suite.” “My name is Leona
by the way, call me Leona.”
After hours out on the veranda drinking lemonade and laughing
until they were crying and back again, the two ventured out to the pasture so
that Sara could see where her father had spent all these years. Leona held out
her hand and waved it forward like a game show host model, presenting the
prizes in store. “This is it.” She said to Sara, like it was an inheritance
finally at hand. Sara stood there quiet
for a moment taking it all in, when suddenly she looked back at Leona, and it
hit her. Her eyes got wide as moon pies,
and then she stepped back from Leona.
Leona reached out toward her. “It
is me honey, it’s okay, it is me.”
This is just the beginning……
©Carrie Van Horn 2019
©Carrie Van Horn 2019
Oh Carrie, what a rivetting read . . . loved the story but at first did not get it.
ReplyDeleteRead it again and the names rang true.
What a shock for her . . . but no doubt she took it well.
The main thing is that he/she loved Sara.
You kept me on my toes and even I jumped when a hand appeared out of nowhere with no warning on her shoulder.
Great writing format for this prompt . . . Cheers, Eddie :)
Thank you so much Eddie! Story telling is my weakness but i still like writing it. 😎
DeleteThis was an awesome confounding of my expectations. Really interested in what might be coming next!
ReplyDeleteThank you Chrissa...it will probably continue at some point..the continuation is still in progress. 😎
DeleteI love it when a character goes in search of truth and ends up finding truth (plus a lot more).
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad that this is just the beginning. Because it will be grand to see how their relationship will grow, and to learn how the neighbors interact with Leona (and if they know the secret).
Awesome!
Thank you Magaly! 🌷 i am looking forward to seeing where my muse takes it myself. 😀
DeleteKa-pow! I did NOT see that one coming. This was such a delightful twist. I completely love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry that makes me happy! 😊
DeleteThis is so intriguing! I can’t wait to read more of it. Mysterious ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sara....what is ahead in the story is still a mystery to me. LOL
DeleteI had to read it a second time to understand it, but then wow! I love it. You hit just the right tone.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shay! That makes my day! I look forward to reading yours. :-)
DeleteThe mystery at the end is most intriguing. I am looking forward to reading the continuation of this. Well done!
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