Capturing Freedom


This week at Poetry Jam the prompt is to create and share a Anaphora poem.
An Anaphora is "the repetition of a word or expression several times within a clause or within a paragraph".
This is my attempt at one:


Freedom cannot be captured like a bird with tattered wing,
yet freedom can be embraced with voices that proudly sing.
Freedom will not be held down like a victim in the street,
yet freedom will lie comfortably where two hearts humbly meet.
Freedom is a nomad that never sits still in one place,
yet freedom is a placid pool unwavered by wind's change.
Freedom knows no boundaries, like barbed wire and skin's slice,
yet freedom has a grasp that pulls deep, like the moon does to the tide.

Comments

  1. Carrie, great capture.... freedom is everything....wonderful lines :)

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  2. Carrie, thank you for 'jamming' with us. Gosh, you have captured so much of 'freedom' in your poem. Your poem is deep....and resonates.

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  3. I love the contrasts here... freedom is everything.

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  4. nice carrie...some really great lines in this...and some nice contrasts as well...you def captured freedom....

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  5. Good exploration of hte paradoxical nature of freedom. I especially like that it cannot be "held down like a victim in the street/"

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  6. I like it - & for some reason it reminds me of the poem that I wrote for the Jam this week. Maybe it says it a little more clearly even :)

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  7. Freedom is everything that we missed. I love the contrasts you depicted in succeeding lines. Great write Carrie!

    Hank

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