tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post954882969196603144..comments2024-03-14T00:10:30.777-07:00Comments on A Net Full of Butterflies: A Whisper In a HailstormCarrie Van Hornhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-44601749333264202452014-10-29T00:29:00.614-07:002014-10-29T00:29:00.614-07:00What a beautiful message this is. Looks as if you ...What a beautiful message this is. Looks as if you and i both love butterflies! They have a great deal of meaning in my life. Hugs to you from TexasJeannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282631333469688624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-90788579407266937972014-10-22T20:41:43.997-07:002014-10-22T20:41:43.997-07:00Wow - wonderfully and deeply expressed. Enjoyed i...Wow - wonderfully and deeply expressed. Enjoyed it immensely. Loved it all, but the last four really pack a punch.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-31255868628503435452014-10-21T09:48:34.827-07:002014-10-21T09:48:34.827-07:00Dear Carie, this poem should be used as guidelines...Dear Carie, this poem should be used as guidelines for relationships where partners focus on doing "just enough" and sometimes less than that. Then again, they might miss the message completely... Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-91778414317347118432014-10-21T02:26:50.375-07:002014-10-21T02:26:50.375-07:00If heard it said that only our good acts survive o...If heard it said that only our good acts survive our death. A good heart is known for its acts. Only a smile is visible in the dark. Nicely crafted, loved the slant rhyme. It resonates.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-11779249961375835212014-10-20T19:56:49.695-07:002014-10-20T19:56:49.695-07:00Complacency is ineffective, for sure. I like the w...Complacency is ineffective, for sure. I like the way you tied this together at the end.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-2124632009217568102014-10-20T16:06:12.386-07:002014-10-20T16:06:12.386-07:00Lovely ... your title: an inspired, indelible pre...Lovely ... your title: an inspired, indelible precursor to a beautifully penned contemplation of that which is left undone and unspoken.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-30788131067402765762014-10-20T13:21:04.708-07:002014-10-20T13:21:04.708-07:00The images of whispers in a hailstorm and a shadow...The images of whispers in a hailstorm and a shadow in the dark.. The half painted painting and the complacent love... It all come together so well.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7299990210253432808.post-58975398865004628702014-10-20T12:41:16.360-07:002014-10-20T12:41:16.360-07:00Your message is strongly felt in this poem, Carrie...Your message is strongly felt in this poem, Carrie. Great use of comparison.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com